Tuesday, November 21, 2006

The Other Side of Night

The morning, another wake-up
Envisioned as one of those
Movie montages with rock music
And a girl with a starboard chest
To spend the rest of your life with
She's a fighter, and that's
The best we've got
But no one will ever die
I'll take you from yours
If you take me from mine
We're upstairs with hot coffee standing by
Waking up is as falling asleep
Now start over


  1. Nice work. Congratulations to you both.
    I detect a bit of Raymond Chandler's style in some of the pieces - well done for he's a hard act to follow.
    Best wishes.

  2. I commend you, for I am only able to write with such creativity when I am in one of those moods. You get the point...it's original and I wish there were more to read. Make a book or something, I would read it if that's any insentive.

  3. You have some nice work here. I like it. This is my first visit.