Wednesday, January 26, 2011

SPLACES (Redux)

It's places filled with spaces
And spaces between places
People away from people
And people away from themselves
As people in present places, outside
Other blocks of stacked spaces
Hide inside spaces of themselves too
As she hides herself, he hides himself too
Although, just as most too
In far SPLACES
People and places
Are merged
With inner and outer spaces
Come to better places
(far away)

4 comments:

  1. Splaces...I thought that was pretty funny. Nice work

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  2. You are very talented. I admire you. :)

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  3. Serious or sarcastic about what? I really think you're a good poet, if that's what you mean.

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