Thursday, October 26, 2006

Last Chance for a Slow Dance

Somehow with you here, and
These taps and twists,
Tips and twirls, a
Mending melting movement collective
Rectifies a dark sky,
Just outside,
A day of coming atom gloom

Let’s take this,
For time is short...
Girl, just like your skirt
For a day outside,
Is coming dark and doom
Our last chance,
For a slow dance
Close...rr…k?...BOOM!!!!

3 comments:

  1. OK.. I actually liked this.. heehe... Right on! Thanks for the mid-morning smile!!!

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  2. I really enjoyed it and Thank You!

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  3. great poem. simply beautiful...and funny too. Hmm...hope the "k...BOOM" part just ends up being great sex and not the end of the world!
    thanks!

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