tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14726658.post112451702681157974..comments2023-09-16T09:25:15.496-05:00Comments on Tim and Jim's Awesome Blog: The Battle of Paper & Clip Jamweshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17941317821226471196noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14726658.post-1136840814763061742006-01-09T15:06:00.000-06:002006-01-09T15:06:00.000-06:00I know it's a bit tired, but I really do love poem...I know it's a bit tired, but I really do love poems that rhyme, I love the way they sound. I really liked the imagery that you brought to such simple every day objects as the paper and the paper clip. Nice work.Rinse Cyclehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02799753894907623544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14726658.post-1136584184669212122006-01-06T15:49:00.000-06:002006-01-06T15:49:00.000-06:00Cool shoes, dude. What are MY suggestions? Lookit ...Cool shoes, dude. What are MY suggestions? Lookit my basic overview of my novel and go from there. God bless you with discerment, brudda.-blessed holy socks, the non-perishable-zealothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00241446130197185049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14726658.post-1129308743902468432005-10-14T11:52:00.000-05:002005-10-14T11:52:00.000-05:00When I read this poem I get a sing-song flow in my...When I read this poem I get a sing-song flow in my mind. Most of the flow works, but some did not. Take the third line for example, "For clip was firm and held things in proper place." held things in proper place just dosen't flow well with the first two lines.Jamweshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17941317821226471196noreply@blogger.com